Good job, that cliffhanger will keep me suspended all the way until next update.
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I'd say be confident in your writing. It's really good as long as you actually read everything without skimming through. Although it seems that skimming through lines is actually quite common behaviour of vn readers, which causes them to skip a lot of details, and there is a lot of neat and funny details in your writing.
I somehow managed to get both variables during day 8 toki scene? Is it known issue?
Edit: Finally finished reading it and it's soo good. Story makes you feel a dozen of different emotions and I certainly can tell that I was constantly entertained in more than one way. And most importantly, different means of entertaining a reader miraculously don't clash or hinder each other. I honestly don't get how this is not super popular. I mean, no routes, obviously, but if people judge story based on that before even trying, I just feel sorry for them.